Blog Review Scriptwriting P3, M3

I have assessed your blog in relation to P3 & M3 of Unit 27  Scriptwriting. This criteria requires you to answer the following question….

Have you understood how to improve your script/s and been able to redraft it with improvements?

Evidence: More than one draft of your script posted in your blog

- with progression between drafts demonstrated.

Megan, the evidence you have provided for Criteria 3 demonstrates thatyou have achieved P3 at this point in the process. Your posts require additional analysis supporting the changes made to your script. You have demonstrated development in the second draft of your soap opera script, but need to support this by demonstrating you have understood the reasons for the changes made.

Green = the level you are currently working at .

Red= the areas you need to focus on to achieve the next criteria

*You will maintain this grade if you continue providing this level of detail, examples and analysis in your blog posts. If you wish to improve your grade, please look carefully at the annotated criteria provided below.

To achieve P3 of the Scriptwriting Unit, You should include some evidence of the revision of your script There is a clear distinction between the first draft of the script and your separate final draft.  

To achieve M3of the Scriptwriting Unit, You need to achieve all of the Pass criteria and include detailed evidence of where and why changes have been made.

To achieve D3 of the Scriptwriting Unit, You should demonstrate a sense of continually revising and an understanding that, the only reason revision stops is because of given deadlines..

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